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&hingwrongwithusieheyarequiteeffees-butthemissideredpoorstyleiing.Whenyouwritetoomaences,ywillturnouttobedullandunnatural.
Forexample:
1)Thispoemwaswrittenbyayounggirl.Shewasterminallyill(患绝症的).ShewasinaNewYorkhospital.
2)Syisapromisingnewsourergy.Syisenergyfromthesun'sradiation.
Eaplesentencesabovebeabioalongerahlyflowiherevisedversionsareasfollows:
3)Thispoemwaswrittenbyaterminally-illyounggirlinaNewYorkhospital.
4)Sy,whiergyfromthesun'sradiation,isapromisingnewsourergy.
&enbiningisnotonlysimplyaobeaplishedbutalsoaskilltobelearhus,youshouldtrytoavoidtoomaeny,espeacademig.
Practice2-9-1
bineeapleseoalongerahlyflowiengonlyoneperiod(句号)attheeehewasnedkeepthemeaningthesame.Forexample:
Choppy:Kehaveeolivefortably.Forthatreasonheislookingforanewjob.
bined:Kehaveeolivefortablyislookingforanewjob.
Or:Kenislookingforanewjobbecausehedoesnothaveeolivefortably.
Ansrovidedonlyforthefirstfivesentences.
1.puterteologyhasadvahepastfiveyears.Itsadvanceshavebeendramatic.
2.HewasabsentfromclassyesterdayHewassi'tgotoschool.
3.ThenovelisaboutlifeontheAmazon.Itis300pageslong.Itisveryiing.
4.Alllivingthingsneedenergy.Elyfromthesun.Energyesilyfromthesun.
5.Awomaofherhouse.Shesawthreeoldmehreeoldmenhadlohebeardswerewhite.Theyweresittinginthewoman'sfrontyard.
&hesamei.Ouriissinging.Singinghasbroughtustogether.
7.AfamousHongKoedfivemilliondollars.Themoneywillbeusedtobuildseveralschools.TheseschoolswillbebuiltinsionsinSiProviheseregiobyahquake.
8.Thereisapiandihemoureelookslikeagiahetreesaroundit.
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