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Parallelism(orparallelstructure)istheuseofaseriesofwords,phrases,subordinateclauses,orseobeparallel,eatmustmatchtheothers;inotherwords,allelementsinaseriesshouldbeallnouives,adverbs,orverbsinthefor
1.Parallelwords
1)Writingisaslowprsiderablethought,time,a.
&obed,earlytorise,makesamahy,wealthy,andwise.
3)Ihereareenoughtimesointed,depressedandannoyed.
4)Theuaeographically,spirituallyandprofessionally.
5)Eahasauniquewayofseeioug,tastingandthinking.
6)Thethreemostonpurparetoeoinform,andtopersuade.
2.Parallelphrases
1)Theadventurous(历险者)arefreetofollowthesmallesttracks(小路)upthemountains,acrossthedesertsoris.
2)Thekeystradesaretotakeeffeotesinclass,toplanstudytime,andtopreparecarefullyforexams.
3)Welear,experie,andhopeforsuthefuture.
4)Seeingmuch,sufferingmudstudyingmucharethethreepillars(支柱).
3.Parallelsubordinateclauses
1)Johhisbookwouldbepublished,thatitwouldbeeabestseller,andthatitwouldbemadeintoamovie.
2)Sheisawomaands,whoenjoyshouseorshipsherhusband.
3)Somecollegegraduatesattendlawschoolbecausetheyhopetogethigh-payingjobs,becausetheyareowork,aheyareelsetodo.
4.Parallelsentences
1)Therearethreewaystomakemoney.Youheritit.Youmarryit.Youstealit.
2)AllofJimmy'sfriendssayheisawuy.Whenafriendneedsmoney,Jimmyisreadytolendit.Whenafriendneedssomehelp,Jimmyistheretogivehimahand.Whenafriendneedsaride,JimmyofferstotakehiEveryonelovesJimmyandthi.Buthiswifethioogenerous.
3)Similarly,atomseandgoinamolecule(分子),butthemoleculeremains;moleeandgoihecellremains;eandgoinabody,butthebodyremains;personseandganization,buttheanizationremains.
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Faultyparallelismosesdohesamegrammatietypicalexamplesarelistedbelow:
1)Ourteacherteacheswithskillandhumorously.
2)ProfessorCrayaskedherstudentstoclosetheirbooks,totakeoutapenandapieceofpaper,andthattheyweretowriteashortposition.
3)Ingacareer,youshouldplancarefullyandalsosomereseareeded.
&ehesameproblem:faultyparallelisIence1),skillisanoun,buthumorouslyisanadverb.Ihefirsttwoelemeivephrases,yetthethirdo.Ihefirstelemeivevoice,yettheseentisshiftedtothepassivevoiecessarily.
Tobeparallel,elementsiallbeexpressedii.Theabovesentenbecorrectedasfollows:
4)Ourteacherteacheswithskillandhumor.
5)ProfessorCrayaskedherstudentstoclosetheirbooks,totakeoutapenandapieceofpaper,andtowriteashortposition.
6)Ingacareer,youshouldplancarefullyandalsodosomeresearch.
Practice2-8-1
&ifywhieachpairbelowsacorrectparallelstrudusparallelelements.Ansrovided.
1.(a)Hetookthejobbeeededmoneyaedexperience.
(b)Hetookthejobbeeededtoearnsomemoneyandex-periencewouldbeusefultohi
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